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Xandering the Dungeon

July 23rd, 2010

The Caverns of Thracia / The Keep on the Shadowfell

I believe that dungeons should always be heavily xandered.

Okay, it’s true. I’m just making words up now. When it comes to xandering the dungeon, though, what I wanted was a word that could capture the pioneering dungeon design of Jennell Jaquays, who designed Caverns of ThraciaDark Tower, Griffin Mountain, and a half dozen other old school classics for Judges Guild, Chaosium, Flying Buffalo, and TSR. Because a word for that didn’t exist yet, I felt compelled to create one.

This article originally coined a different term. Click here for an explanation.

After amazing work in tabletop RPGs, Jaquays transitioned into video game design, and in that latter capacity she recently wrote some essays on maps she designed for Halo Wars:

Memorable game maps spring from a melding of design intent and fortunate accidents.
Jennell Jaquays – Crevice Design Notes

That’s timeless advice, and a design ethos which extends beyond the RTS levels she helped design for Halo Wars and reaches back to her earliest work.

What Jaquays particularly excelled at in those early Judges Guild modules was non-linear dungeon design.

For example, in Caverns of Thracia Jaquays includes three separate entrances to the first level of the dungeon. And from Level 1 of the dungeon you will find two conventional paths and no less than eight unconventional or secret paths leading down to the lower levels. (And Level 2 is where things start getting really interesting.)

The result is a fantastically complex and dynamic environment: You can literally run dozens of groups through this module and every one of them will have a fresh and unique experience.

But there’s more value here than just recycling an old module: That same dynamic flexibility which allows multiple groups to have unique experiences also allows each individual group to chart their own course. In other words, it’s not just random chance that’s resulting in different groups having different experiences: Each group is actively making the dungeon their own. They can retreat, circle around, rush ahead, go back over old ground, poke around, sneak through, interrogate the locals for secret routes… The possibilities are endless because the environment isn’t forcing them along a pre-designed path. And throughout it all, the players are experiencing the thrill of truly exploring the dungeon complex.

By way of comparison, Keep on the Shadowfell is an extremely linear dungeon:


(This diagram uses a method laid out by Melan in this post at ENWorld. You can also find a detailed explanation in How to Use a Melan Diagram.)

Some would argue that this sort of linear design is “easier to run”. But I don’t think that’s actually true to any appreciable degree. In practice, the complexity of a xandered dungeon emerges from the same simple structures that make up a linear dungeon: The room the PCs are currently in has one or more exits. What are they going to do in this room? Which exit are they going to take?

In a linear dungeon, the pseudo-choices the PCs make will lead them along a pre-designed, railroad-like route. In a xandered dungeon, on the other hand, the choices the PCs make will have a meaningful impact on how the adventure plays out, but the actual running of the adventure isn’t more complex as a result.

On the other hand, the railroad-like quality of the linear dungeon is not its only flaw. It eliminates true exploration (for the same reason that Lewis and Clark were explorers; whereas when I head down I-94 I am merely a driver). It can significantly inhibit the players’ ability to make meaningful strategic choices. It is, frankly speaking, less interesting and less fun.

So I’m going to use the Keep on the Shadowfell to show you how easy it is to xander your dungeons by making just a few simple, easy tweaks.

Go to Part 2

XANDERING THE DUNGEON
Part 2: Xandering Techniques
Part 3: The Philosophy of Xandering
Part 4: Xandering the Keep on the Shadowfell
Part 5: Xandering for Fun and Profit

Addendum: Dungeon Level Connections
Addendum: Xandering on the Small Scale
Addendum: How to Use a Melan Diagram
Dark Tower: Level Connections

49 Responses to “Xandering the Dungeon”

  1. Maps and the Adventure Gaming Hobby | Jeffro's Space Gaming Blog says:

    […] take the shortest path between two points!) Of course, in dungeon layouts that are insufficiently [xandered]; and in games where the playing time for combats take 10 times as long as those in B/X […]

  2. Isometric vector Goth Gulgamel says:

    […] of the book, this particular dungeon isn't the greatest dungeon or map in the world. I plan on [xandering] the dungeon (and changing some of the encounters, which is beyond the scope of this post). At the same time, I […]

  3. The Allure of the Mega-Dungeon @ RPG MUSINGS says:

    […] [Xandering] the Dungeon, a multi-part article series from The Alexandrian about how to create non linear dungeons in the fashion of Jennell Jaquays‘ Caverns of Thracia and Dark Tower, two classics published by Judges Guild in the late 70s. The components of good dungeon design discussed in this article can indeed be ported to modern dungeons. […]

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  5. — #Теория — Открывая ваш игровой стол (перевод) says:

    […] Я уже писал ранее о нескольких игровых сессиях, которые я провёл в его заброшенных залах. Я также использовал его в качестве примера того, как можно сделать ваше собственное подземелье «в стиле Жако». […]

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  7. Seed: Goth Gulgamel | DivNull Productions says:

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  10. Isikyus says:

    This series (plus observations of real-world places) has given me basically my entire approach to map design.

    I’m still getting the hang of how to do it properly — for instance, my last adventure put all the monsters in dead-end rooms, so the players had little reason to move through loops — but it’s been a key factor in every adventure I’ve run so far.

  11. PIER — a one-dimensional dungeon for INTO THE ODD – ersatz esoterica says:

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  12. Gamosopher says:

    I never bothered to actually read the EN World post you shared until now, and man, shame on me : it’s a great read, and a great tool to make dungeons better.

    The subsequent posters also exemplifies pretty well the “Railroad is fun” motto. 🙂

  13. John says:

    Cross-posting an interesting video series on The Legend of Zelda dungeon design, which has some interesting parallels with your blog series.
    https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLc38fcMFcV_ul4D6OChdWhsNsYY3NA5B2

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  16. Kyyshak says:

    As the images on the ENWorld forum thread have since been lost to the web, I went hunting for any other details and found the following, a copy of Melan’s original post with images still intact:
    http://www.darkshire.net/jhkim/rpg/dnd/dungeonmaps.html

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  19. Session Recap of Beneath the Fallen Tower Playtest at Manhattan Minicon 3 | Northport says:

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  20. unrolistefrancais says:

    That’s make perfect sense in the Dark Souls video game’s, especially the first one. The feeling of exploration is huge, due to the interconnections and the choices they bring.

  21. Yop says:

    Great stuff! Can I translate it to spanish?

  22. Justin Alexander says:

    E-mail me at the address in the About link (in the right hand column at the top of the page) for translation queries.

  23. This is Not a Game | says:

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  25. 5 Tricks for Creating Brilliant Dungeon Maps From Will Doyle | DMDavid says:

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  35. Rak says:

    A quick comment to thank you for this awesome article!
    There are a lot of articles and videos about how to improve your game/dungeon/NPC (you name it), but this one is really a gem.
    The Hexcrawl article is also very nice.

  36. Dillon says:

    Nice article. I’m running an immense dungeon at the moment called “The Halls of Arden Vul” written for OSRIC, but I’m using 5e because we’re on roll20 and it has good support, and also because it’s what my Players wanted.

    What’s great about Arden Vul is that it truly could be played twenty times over and have completely different results. There are entry points and exit points and chutes that drop you five levels deeper with no regard for what level the PCs are. There are creatures not remotely made to be taken on by low level groups, and there are factions that are doing their own thing. Interacting with them or even killing them will often have a completely unintended effect which I as the DM have to take into account.

    It’s a blast and for all the 5e modules I have bought nothing comes close to it. The hardcovers from WoTC feel a lot like you’re reading the script for a play.

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  40. Anthony G says:

    I’ve been reading this series of articles and it’s dawned on me that there is some basic information not mentioned that I don’t know.

    How do you actually present the dungeon to your PCs? Do you run it theater-of-mind? Do you draw the room the players are in only if combat erupts? Many of these techniques assume the players can’t see the whole map, or have no idea of the geography during non-combat time. You assume players have to map their way through the dungeon to know where they are.

    I’ve only been DMing for 2 years, and my entire experience has used online VTTs. I draw my dungeon maps in map-drawing programs, and then manipulate the “fog of war” with dynamic lighting to restrict my players’ view. Lot’s of the techniques mentioned in this series just don’t work with this method (for example, slight inclines in paths, or other ways to obfuscate geography). It’s a lot harder to confuse the players when the map exists, in one hand-drawn piece uploaded to the VTT.

    This also leads to other tactical issue. My party has 3 players, but many NPCs accompanying them. Most of these dungeons have 5-foot wide hallways. This means I have this very long conga-line of players moving their tokens about. If the player at the front enters a room and starts combat, people at the back may need to spend their whole turn just walking to the encounter, and that’s no fun.

    There’s also the question of how to run non-combat movement in these digital battlemaps. Should I allow them to move their tokens around by their free will? Or should I instead run the dungeon as a sort of “node structure” where I let the players choose “I take the left door” and then teleport them to the next room or intersection down that hallway? What about random encounters during dungeon travel? I shudder at the thought of running a whole combat encounter in a long 5-foot wide hallway.

    I’d love to be able to use more of these classic dungeon-planning techniques, but they just seem so incompatible with the digital battlemap style.

  41. colin r says:

    The closest I’ve personally come to using a VTT is a shared Google Slides document, pasting pieces of map one room at a time. I would imagine the way to make a sloping corridor work in a VTT is to find an excuse to swap the map when they players aren’t looking, or to just swap it and when they ask “huh, what happened?” give your best DM shrug and say “What do you mean, what happened? Nothing happened.”

    Five-foot hallways are wider than the hallways in a lot of houses. People can pass each other, but probably take a half-step out of each other’s way. You’re welcome to decide for yourself what amount of PCs trying to pile past each other in a hallway fight — nothing says you have to stick to the letter of whatever’s in the rules, if it’s making things not be fun.

    That said, you’re not the one who should be afraid of a hallway fight. Your *players* should be afraid of a hallway fight. Give them something scary blocking the hall where only one or two of them can properly engage and the rest have their line-of-sight obstructed by their friends. Even better, have the scary thing sneak up on them from behind and melee with the squishy casters while the fighter has to struggle back through the lines to be able to even help.

    If you’ve never done dungeon-delving without all the video-game trappings of VTTs and dynamic lighting and fog-of-war, try sometime doing without it. You might like it, or anyway, you might learn some stuff that you can keep doing even with VTTs. You’re not running a video game, and you don’t have to limit yourself to only doing stuff that fits in a video game.

    But backing off from the details, at a higher level, most of [xandering] is about making maps with loops and branches with meaningful choices in them, and none of *that* is any different no matter how you present it, full VTT or scrawled maps on a dry-erase board or pure “you enter a 20×20 room with doors on the north and east walls”. Your players still get to have the option of saying, “you know, maybe we should try going the other way first.”

  42. colin r says:

    “You’re welcome to decide for yourself what amount of PCs *can* pile past each other in a hallway fight”

  43. Anthony G. says:

    I think I’d enjoy running the game without a VTT, but I use it more as a necessity than a convenience. My players are my high school friends, who are all now in different cities or states for college. It’s a lot easier to run once a week online than organize flights to the same place to have an in-person game. I only had a few months of in-game play experience in high school, so I never got the chance to learn much via “osmosis”. My old DM, now one of my players, wasn’t all that experienced either. That’s why I find this entire blog very useful, as a sort of replacement for what I might have learned naturally over decades of play and after reading hundreds of adventures.

    My only real in-person dungeon-delving experience was with my wizard-barbarian bugbear (my first character ever) in a kobold lair. I took command of the kobolds by proving my might, and then promptly got disintegrated by the lightning breath of a mechanical dragon the kobolds accidentally dug up, and that we accidentally activated. A very interesting and memorable experience haha. I recall we used a dry-erase marker on a reusable grid to draw out the cave system and move between the areas.

    Switching out the map during play is a good idea. It’s pretty easy to do if I have the other map as an invisible layer that I toggle on/off on top of the current map. I’ve actually done that in previous sessions for evolving environments (players were fighting evil kuo-toa while two kuo-toa archpriests battled each other, summoning tsunamis that flooded the map for a few rounds every time). I haven’t had the opportunity to use that often though because I am running Out of the Abyss, and it has painfully little in terms of dungeon-crawling (or anything else for that matter). It requires a lot of work to maintain.

    I really like making pretty maps, but I can see how it puts some limits on play. For one, it’s time-consuming to make a new map for practically every combat encounter. It also sets unintentional rails on where a combat encounter starts. If I don’t have a map prepared for a location that might host combat, I feel reluctant to run it (though I do have a stock of generic caverns to run those if they occur). The amount of time it takes to make a pretty map also means that more complex dungeons take that much more time to think of and then make. I find that the tactical depth a grid map adds to combat, combined with the automated rolling and damage calculations of VTTs is a really huge asset. Though it does make my players more prone to combat if they see me pull up a map (in their defense, they recently peacefully negotiated with driders even though I had their entire camp mapped and stat blocks prepared). I have, however, run many chase sequences in theater-of-mind, and other encounter types that really traverse a long distance and wouldn’t fit on a single map.

    I’m about to have my party raid a mind flayer lair to steal some elder brain juice for a ritual. Mind-flayers have very “vertical” dungeons because they can levitate at will, so it’s definitely an opportunity for some [xandering] with multiple levels and three-dimensional loops. I’m not sure how they’ll survive if they actually alert the mind flayers though… those narrow hallways are really going to bunch them up for the brain-fry rays.

  44. Winter’s Daughter – Session Notes & Thoughts, Pt. 1 – The Lady and Tiger says:

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  45. Joseph R says:

    The link at the bottom “Go to Part 2” is now broken. It has the new page name only, without the full alexandrian.net path, so clicking it goes to “http://xandering-the-dungeon-part-2-xandering-techniques/”

  46. Evil Ruins (Role Aids, 1983) | Stuffed Crocodile says:

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  47. nate says:

    Lame that you changed this to Xandering.

  48. Joey says:

    Trying to scrub “jaquaysing” from the culture and replace it with “xandering” is quite draconian, perhaps even orwellian.

  49. Secrets of Blackmoor says:

    Jaquays didn’t create the method of having non linear dungeons.

    The very first dungeon ever created, Blackmoor, was a mess of meandering hallways and up and down access points.

    Jaquays created brilliant modules, with Enchanted Wood being my favorite of all. Yet, the method really was created by Dave Arneson.

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